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My first summary was a bad one. But, isn’t this the thing about firsts? They should be bad so that you can learn from your mistakes? Henry’s suggestion was to learn when to use the articles. It’s not easy for a Turkish girl to learn the articles. I’ve been told to use them in German – before every noun and the right article (as there are 100 articles, at least I feel like there are 100 articles in German)! To be honest, I had a bad feeling about summaries first but I feel like I’ve learned from my mistakes and I’m more confident when I write a summary now. 

First Version 

In his article in Telegraph from the 23rd October 2013 Ambrose Evans Pritchard analyses the deflation within Europe.

At the beginning he illustrates the European deflation by using a comparison to the Japanese deflation. Deflation means no economical growth which is be a positive case if the country is not be in debt but due to the European Debt Crisis, a deflation would cause a bigger problem than assumed for Europe. Not only national debts would be impossible to pay off but also private debts would be affected badly by this.

According to Ambrose Evans Pritched’s suggests an increase of inflation within Europe, but Germany resists against such a policy as their economy is in good condition in the short term. In the long run this unsolved problem will also affect Germany’s economy. To carry out this kind of an inflation policy Club Med partners should ally against Germany and force the country to accept inflation.

Another solution could be the attempt to cut spending, which is a highly unpopular process for the population.

In brief, Europe is hoping for a miracle to occur that solves the European deflation and saves them from falling into a deeper crisis.

Corrected Version

In his article in Telegraph from the 23rd October 2013 Ambrose Evans-Pritchard analyses the deflation within Europe.

In the beginning he illustrates European deflation by using a comparison to Japan. Deflation means no economical growth which is be a positive case if the country is not be in debt but due to European debt crisis, deflation would cause a bigger problem than assumed for Europe. Not only national debts would be impossible to pay off but also private debts would be affected badly by this.

Another solution could be the attempt to cut spending, which is a highly unpopular process for the population.

Evans-Pritchard suggests an increase of inflation within Europe, but Germany resists such a policy as their economy is in good condition in the short term. In the long run this unsolved problem will also affect Germany’s economy. To carry out this kind of an inflation policy Club Med partners should ally against Germany and force the country to accept inflation.

In brief, Europe is hoping for a miracle to occur that solves the European deflation and saves them from falling into a deeper crisis.